10 sentence outline

New 10 Sentence Outline

1.     Hunter goes down to the pool to do his daily laps but gets pulled back by a man, saving his life as the pool is frozen.

2.     Back at his apartment still dazed and confused, he watched the news and notices numbers ticking above a new reporters head.

3.     On the way to work he sees more people with numbers and tries to figure things out.

4.     Continues walking through a busier district and it let confused in the middle of everyone.

5.     Runs to the hospital close by. Witnesses a boys death and realises what the numbers represent.

6.     Calls his girlfriend for support while waiting for a train to her in an underground station.

7.     While anxiously waiting, Hunter watches the premier on the TV talk about the success of eliminating train tunnel erosion.

8.     He finally gets on the train and observes everyone’s timers surrounding him.

9.     The train lights turn off and nothing but the red timers can be seen in the dark.

1.  The timers stop and change to 10 seconds. Hunter does nothing but panic as well as others. The sound of a huge mass crashes in the darkness. Silence is heard.